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I like traveling a lot, be it a tourist or as a traveler.I like to travel in the mountains, see how the viewsI asked a friend, and a friend introduced me to a place called Bridge over the River Kwai.It was a place that we were impressed and wanted me to go, so I agreed and we decided to leave for the trip to Kanchanaburi.

This place is my favorite and most impressed with mountain and river views.I was the recommended person to this place and I came with a friend who recommended me because I have never traveled this far.This place is called Bridge over the River Kwai.The first day I came, I made a reservation for a 2 person bedroom.The staff at this hotel serve us very well.And he will be a kind person who will guide you through experiences with this place and also be a guide for us.The next morning we went to the Wa River Bridge.We can have that history with this bridge and a burden to visit.After learning the history of this place, I took a walk to see the mountain and river views.This place is more beautiful than we expected.In the evening we will go to find something to eat.The food of the local people is pure, clean and delicious food that makes us want to eat, so 2 of us go to the restaurant to eat and prepare to go home.

Overall, this place is very good and has a lot of tourists, making it one of our most impressed places.The people were so nice and kind, it was easy to share and approach us because we were very impressed with this placeIf there is another opportunity, next time we will invite all of our friends to this place because we are very pampered and want everyone or friends to come.
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