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The worst thing in my life was when I temporary couldn't walk. It happened when I was 11 years old. One morning on the second floor of my house, I woke up, took a bath, and was ready to go to school. But when I tried to stand up, I couldn't move my legs. I was shocked at that time. I thought it was because I slept on one side for too long, which caused numbness in my legs. After waiting for a while, my legs didn't get better. I got scared, so I crawled down the stairs to the first floor. When both my parents saw me, they were shocked and rushed to my aid. I told them what happened.
My mom took me to the hospital. I was young at that time and didn't remember what the doctor said regarding my illness. I didn't go to school for a week. But in week 2, I was able to walk again when I woke up, so I asked my mom to take me to school. But while I was walking, I could feel the pain on my legs as if they were tearing apart, but I endured it. It was a good thing that my friends were there to support me. I could walk normally on the third week. This event made me understand the feelings of people with disabilities very well, and it also made me think that being born with a perfect body was the best.
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The worst thing in my life was when I temporary couldn't walk. It happened when I was 11 years old. One morning on the second floor of my house, I woke up, took a bath, and was ready to go to school. But when I tried to stand up, I couldn't move my legs. I was shocked at that time. I thought it was because I slept on one side for too long, which caused numbness in my legs. After waiting for a while, my legs didn't get better. I got scared, so I crawled down the stairs to the first floor. When both my parents saw me, they were shocked and rushed to my aid. I told them what happened.
My mom took me to the hospital. I was young at that time and didn't remember what the doctor said regarding my illness. I didn't go to school for a week. But in week 2, I was able to walk again when I woke up, so I asked my mom to take me to school. But while I was walking, I could feel the pain on my legs as if they were tearing apart, but I endured it. It was a good thing that my friends were there to support me. I could walk normally on the third week. This event made me understand the feelings of people with disabilities very well, and it also made me think that being born with a perfect body was the best.
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The worst thing in life is "I can't walk." Things happened when I was 11 years old. in the morning on the 2nd floor of the house. I got up. I was getting up. I took a bath and dressed up to go to school. But I stood up and couldn't move my legs. I was shocked at that time, I thought it was because I lay on my leg. Until the legs become numb But after waiting for a while, it didn't get any better. I started to feel scared, so I hurriedly crawled down the stairs to the ground floor. When my parents saw me Both of them were shocked and hurried to see me. so I told them both.
Mom took me to the hospital. At that time I was young, so I can't remember what the doctor said about the cause of walking. I have to stop studying for 1 week. Entering Week 2 I got up and walked on my own so I asked my mother to go to school. But while walking the leg, it hurts a lot As the legs would tear. I can endure it. It's still good that my friends are supporting me when walking. My legs can walk. In the third week. This event made me understand the feelings of people with disabilities well. It makes me think that "The birth of a perfectly normal body Is the best "