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- Haze will occur during the hot season around March - May because it is the summer season and there is a forest tribe in the forest tribe causing a lot of accumulated air pollution causing the air to be impure and affecting the health and the tract. Breathe.
- Affect the visibility of road users.
- Affecting tourism in Chiang Mai, causing the number of tourists to be reduced.
- When it occurs, the solution must begin at the source: seriously dealing with the source of PM2.5 dust. The first thing is to stop burning in the open during the dry season. Regardless of the forest area Or farmland To make the amount of dust Days accumulated until the dust value exceeds the standard has decreased.
- How to fix the problem Is a campaign to reduce the forest tribe by posting a warning sign to prohibit the forest tribe and training to educate people in the community and people in the area around.
- Artificial rain to spray water to reduce dust in the atmosphere.
- Issuing a measure prohibiting violators of the forest tribe, if anyone violates, will be prosecuted strictly.
- From the solution Agree with the solution to the problem. Because the above solution helps to reduce the rate of forest tribes and people Causing the amount of haze to not increase from the campaign causing everyone to participate in the resolution.
- My group will solve the problem by campaigning to wear a mask that can prevent dust before leaving the house every time and campaigning for Chiang Mai people to use buses rather than using private cars and fixing by planting forests to increase green space. Replacing the forest that was lost by the tribe or areas affected by the tribe.

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