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This house consists of many rooms. There are 3 bedrooms, 2 living rooms, a kitchen, a lavatory, a utility room .There are 2 small bedroom to the left of the door. At night, I often sleep in there because I prefer a single bed to a double bed. Sometimes, I and My sister are watching television for relaxation at the living room. It is decorated with  beautiful sofas. My mother often in the kitchen for cooking ,so we seldom go out for  dinner. It consists of a sink , a cupboard, a electric stove. There is a bedroom next to the kitchen. It is my mother’s bedroom. It consists of a double bed and many wardrobes. On the right of the door, there is a lavatory. It consists of toilet, shower .I often sing a song while I take a shower.

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