เพิ่งหัดภาษาอังกฤษค่ะ ไม่มีโอกาสไปเรียนจึงทำตามที่พี่ ๆ ในห้องนี้แนะนำ
อยากลองเขียนดูบ้างค่ะ รบกวนช่วยดูให้ด้วยค่ะ
ว่าผิดตรงไหน แล้วควรใช้อะไรถึงจะถูก เพื่อจะได้ปรับปรุงค่ะ
ขอบคุณมาก ๆ ค่ะ ที่สละเวลามาดูให้ ขอบคุณค่ะ
One day in rainy season at the school when I was young.
It was twilight time and rain falling.
I saw a man in black suit and covered his face.
He stood in the dark shadow.
He was sturdy body and very tall.
In his left hand carried a big bag
and there was a sharp knife in his right hand.
At once he turned back to walk head towards to me.
I rushed to hide behind the bookcases suddenly.
The deeply scared to cover around me.
The sound walk loud up loud up and stopped in front of me.
My hands were sweaty and my heart was pounding like drum in the war of Roman age.
I prayed with hoped that he could not see me.
He continued walking and disappeared into the dark shadow.
So I ran to report the police.
afterward the police could catch him at the school.
He was a prisoner escaped from prison.
รบกวนช่วยตรวจภาษาอังกฤษให้ด้วยค่ะ
อยากลองเขียนดูบ้างค่ะ รบกวนช่วยดูให้ด้วยค่ะ
ว่าผิดตรงไหน แล้วควรใช้อะไรถึงจะถูก เพื่อจะได้ปรับปรุงค่ะ
ขอบคุณมาก ๆ ค่ะ ที่สละเวลามาดูให้ ขอบคุณค่ะ
One day in rainy season at the school when I was young.
It was twilight time and rain falling.
I saw a man in black suit and covered his face.
He stood in the dark shadow.
He was sturdy body and very tall.
In his left hand carried a big bag
and there was a sharp knife in his right hand.
At once he turned back to walk head towards to me.
I rushed to hide behind the bookcases suddenly.
The deeply scared to cover around me.
The sound walk loud up loud up and stopped in front of me.
My hands were sweaty and my heart was pounding like drum in the war of Roman age.
I prayed with hoped that he could not see me.
He continued walking and disappeared into the dark shadow.
So I ran to report the police.
afterward the police could catch him at the school.
He was a prisoner escaped from prison.