กำลังฝึกภาษาอังกฤษอยู่ค่ะ ก็ฝึกฟัง ฝึกอ่าน ฝึกพูดทุกวันค่ะ แล้วก็อยากฝึกเขียนด้วยค่ะ ไม่รู้จะเขียนอะไรดี ก็เลยแต่งเรื่องขึ้นมาค่ะ แต่ก็ยังเขียนไม่จบค่ะ พอดีแบ่งตอนมาลองตรวจดูก่อนค่ะเผื่อจะผิดเยอะ รบกวนช่วยแนะนำด้วยนะคะ เพราะหนูไม่รู้จะเอาไปให้ใครช่วยดูให้ค่ะ
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Mystery train
Chapter 1 - Drizzling in the wind
One cold night in December before the end of the year would coming. At that time,There was drizzling rain blowing in the wind against my face gently. I thought that drizzle in December was very romantic. But maybe many people didn't like it. Especially that night because since I came out of the office until almost reached at the Sukhumvit subway station. I hadn't seen anyone at all. While I was stepping down to the station. I noticed a big billboard with the message "Destination is the Milky Way station". Perhaps this was a new campaign of MRT.
Chapter 2 - A mystery man
Then I walked towards to buy a ticket at the ticket vending machine. As soon as I pressed a button. All of the lights in the station blackout right away. I could not see anything at all. It was very dark and the air was very cold rapidly. I groped for a mobile in my bag. But I couldn't find. Oh! My goodness! I forgot it. So I walked with my hands out in front of me. At once there was a very cold hand grab my left hand tightly. I screamed with extreme shock!. And my heart seemed like to stop beating. Suddenly he said with kind voice "Don't frighten and follow me I'm a stationmaster"
Chapter 3
He held my hand and took me go on walking until the dim light appeared. Then he turned to smile and said that "follow me this way" and released my hand. As soon as I saw the dim light affected his face. I could recognize this familiar face, the warm eyes and a gentle smile. I was sure. He was a same man in my dreaming. I could see him when I slept almost nights. I got confuse and not sure that it was real or a dream. But in deep down I wanted to the light blackout again. The only one reason he was very handsome.
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Mystery train
Chapter 1 - Drizzling in the wind
One cold night in December before the end of the year would coming. At that time,There was drizzling rain blowing in the wind against my face gently. I thought that drizzle in December was very romantic. But maybe many people didn't like it. Especially that night because since I came out of the office until almost reached at the Sukhumvit subway station. I hadn't seen anyone at all. While I was stepping down to the station. I noticed a big billboard with the message "Destination is the Milky Way station". Perhaps this was a new campaign of MRT.
Chapter 2 - A mystery man
Then I walked towards to buy a ticket at the ticket vending machine. As soon as I pressed a button. All of the lights in the station blackout right away. I could not see anything at all. It was very dark and the air was very cold rapidly. I groped for a mobile in my bag. But I couldn't find. Oh! My goodness! I forgot it. So I walked with my hands out in front of me. At once there was a very cold hand grab my left hand tightly. I screamed with extreme shock!. And my heart seemed like to stop beating. Suddenly he said with kind voice "Don't frighten and follow me I'm a stationmaster"
Chapter 3
He held my hand and took me go on walking until the dim light appeared. Then he turned to smile and said that "follow me this way" and released my hand. As soon as I saw the dim light affected his face. I could recognize this familiar face, the warm eyes and a gentle smile. I was sure. He was a same man in my dreaming. I could see him when I slept almost nights. I got confuse and not sure that it was real or a dream. But in deep down I wanted to the light blackout again. The only one reason he was very handsome.