คุณครูอังกฤษให้แต่งเรื่องเกี่ยวกับประสบการ์ณที่น่าอายที่สุดและเพื่อนที่ดีที่สุดครับ 50 คะแนนดิบๆเลย แล้วก็ครูจะหักจุดผิดจุดละ1คะแนน
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Every person have their embarrasses moment even though they are rich, handsome. My embarrass moment is when I travelled to Burirum last month.I can remember that day accurately. It was sunny. I and my family were driving to Burrirum when my father have a desire to go to the restroom. We finally found a petrol station. We parked our car in front of the restroom and my father went quickly into the restroom. I and my mother made decision to go to 7-11 to buy something to eat. We bought some sandwiches and some water. We were eating sandwiches in front of the 7-11 when my father called us to go back to the car quickly or we will be late for lunch at my grandmother’s house.We ran quickly to a black car. I opened the door of the car rapidly.Suddenly,The old man come to us and said in a woozy voice“ What are you doing at my car? ” then my mother came to me and told me that our car isn’t this car.I was very embarrass when I knew I get into the wrong car. That is my embarrass moment.
Friend is a person who is not an enemy or who is in the same side. Best friend is someone that you can be completely honest with. You can be yourself around that person and that person can be themself around you and shares the strongest possible kind of friendship.To me, Tha is my best friend.She always explains the thing that I don't understand to me but sometimes she explain me the wrong thing but that's ok because there's no one who knows everything in this world.she loves biology ver much.I loves Physics,Math.She helps me with biology and i helps her with Math and Physics and sometimes when i absent or sick she always keep the worksheets for me.That's why Tha is my best friend.
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อยากให้ทุกคนช่วยกรุณาตรวจเรื่องที่ผมแต่งหน่อยครับ grammar อะไรถูกมั้ย ขอบคุณครับ
Every person have their embarrasses moment even though they are rich, handsome. My embarrass moment is when I travelled to Burirum last month.I can remember that day accurately. It was sunny. I and my family were driving to Burrirum when my father have a desire to go to the restroom. We finally found a petrol station. We parked our car in front of the restroom and my father went quickly into the restroom. I and my mother made decision to go to 7-11 to buy something to eat. We bought some sandwiches and some water. We were eating sandwiches in front of the 7-11 when my father called us to go back to the car quickly or we will be late for lunch at my grandmother’s house.We ran quickly to a black car. I opened the door of the car rapidly.Suddenly,The old man come to us and said in a woozy voice“ What are you doing at my car? ” then my mother came to me and told me that our car isn’t this car.I was very embarrass when I knew I get into the wrong car. That is my embarrass moment.
Friend is a person who is not an enemy or who is in the same side. Best friend is someone that you can be completely honest with. You can be yourself around that person and that person can be themself around you and shares the strongest possible kind of friendship.To me, Tha is my best friend.She always explains the thing that I don't understand to me but sometimes she explain me the wrong thing but that's ok because there's no one who knows everything in this world.she loves biology ver much.I loves Physics,Math.She helps me with biology and i helps her with Math and Physics and sometimes when i absent or sick she always keep the worksheets for me.That's why Tha is my best friend.