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August 8th 2013
Today weather's fine and it's clearing up I woke up at 5 o’clock I feel excited because today I’m going to travel at chanuman city with my friends . I arrive at amnatcharoen school in morning. I had waited for my friend 20 minute. Afterward we were go to the Huay sai waterfall. There nature very beautiful and cool. Then we were go to Tadyai waterfall. Waterfall flowing rapids that made We can't to swim. I take photo nature around waterfall. Then we wer
staurant kong riverside. During wait for food We talking about nature. we liked here because it is very beautiful environment. Afterwards we were go to Phukhamdue. During mountain ascent I had seen view on mountain. It very beautiful. When we arrive Phukhamdue Temple. We give food offering to a Buddhist monk. Then we were going to the Phupanomdee . image of Buddha,Pagoda and Various statues. Made from stone such as Naga sing Etc. Afterward we comeback to amnatcharoen This journey is a journey that I'm happy and very fun. I have learned what many
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August 8th 2013
Today weather's fine and it's clearing up I woke up at 5 o’clock I feel excited because today I’m going to travel at chanuman city with my friends . I arrive at amnatcharoen school in morning. I had waited for my friend 20 minute. Afterward we were go to the Huay sai waterfall. There nature very beautiful and cool. Then we were go to Tadyai waterfall. Waterfall flowing rapids that made We can't to swim. I take photo nature around waterfall. Then we wer