อยากให้ช่วยดูนิทาน ให้หน่อยคะ ว่าแต่งเปนงัย grammar แก้ไขงัยดี ???? ก่อนส่งอาจารย์

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แต่งนิทานจาก TENES
1.  Present Simple
2. Present Continuous
3. Present Perfect
4. Present Perfect Continuous

Nannie's very happy
Once upon a time there was a King and a Queen. They lived in a lovely golden house and had a beautiful daughter, Nanie.  But Nannie was very unhappy she has never laughed or smiled.  Nannie has been depressed ever. "We will give a ring to the person who can make Nannie happy," said the Queen A musician came and told joker, but Nannie did not smile or laugh.                                                                              
A young teacher came to work at the Queen's  house. He came with his little cat.  The little cat liked to play. One day Nannie saw the cat and started to smile then she laughed. The Queen heard her daughter and saw the cat the cat was happy to get a ring. I'm very happy.
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