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เรียกได้ว่า เป็นผลงานชิ้นแรกของการเขียนเรียงความ เลยอยากให้ทุกคนอ่าน และ แสดงความคิดเห็นเกี่ยวกับชิ้นนี้หน่อยค่ะ  ติ ชม แนะนำ ได้หมดเลยนะคะ (เรื่องแกรมม่า อาจยังไม่อแข็งนะคะ อภัย ด้วย) ขอบคุณค่ะ
The Reason I Love You
            Have you ever fallen in love with someone just by walking past ? Yes, I have. He didn’t do anything, just is himself and it enough to make me fall in love with him. I don’t know when and why. Before I knew it, I found myself like to walk past him every day that I could. First, my feel was enchanted but when I got to know him, it made me feel love. His charming appearance, green personality, and the good thing he did for me, these are reason why I’m falling in love with him over and over again since I met him that day.
 
            He works at 7-Eleven that place I saw him first time. Sometimes I have to peek at him because I was shy. He is taller than counter and everyone there. His face is as innocent as baby. He has long straight hair in a two-block cut, in his front face has slightly wavy strands of hair. He has tan skin like brown sugar. His lip is full and pink nature like peach. His eye is so gentle like a dear’s eyes. Overall, he looks normal but outstanding in my eyes. When him smile, my heart was like ice cream because his smile is like the shiny sun made my heart melted, just one smile it’s like one touch at my heart and I will never forget that feeling.
 
Then, he started to say hi to me because he noticed that I always went there because of him. He like to talk a lot and has good ears. He doesn’t like the serious thing, when my face looks serious, he will laugh and make me feel happy. He is mature person who can decide everything on his own and I really love that! He is easygoing but it’s hard to guess what he feels or think. He is kind and friendly to new people, customer, children and the dog in front of the store. I think he isn’t introvert just look like one. And he has one thing I don’t like is his walk but now I love everything he is.
 
Later on, he made me was surprised by bough foods that I wanted to eat for me. He always listens to me no matter what about and never judges me. He never told me to do anything; I can be myself when I’m with him, it feels comfortable. He did a little bit thing like always holds my bag for me and takes the trash from my hands. When I was sick, he bought the medicine for me. He didn’t say much but he did it. I never met who more take care of me then him.
 
Finally, in the midst of crowds I don’t see nobody but him, his looks, characters and the valuable action is made me fall in love like falling into the deepest abyss filled with pillows that I can not escape. I would like to say thank to him everything that him did to me, and I wan I’m glad to meet him. I don’t know what will going on, I don’t know how our story will end, but I know my heart will always belong to him.
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