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My name is Nat. I am 17 years old. I live in Udon Thani. I am student. I am a Matthayom  
6 student. I am a student at Mattayomsuksawatpatthamakorn school
My favourite subject is Biology. I don't like Math because it's too difficult. My hobbies are reading books and listening to music. I usually sing in the toilet. My favourite singer is Atom Chanagun because he maker good music and it's cool. I I have a dog and his name is Milo. My I don't like snake because scary. I want to be a farm owner.
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