In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight.
How far do you agree with either of these views?
In each country they have their own learning style, causing many type of education system. As a result, some of education system do not work at all. To illustrate this further, we all know that Finland government educate their population better than China government. That because they use different path to educate their people.
In some states, especially far eastern, people want issues to initiate their education at age of four, starting with nursery school as the very first step of learning. After nursery school, the genuine formal education will begin with primary school, at four years old, and graduate to elementary school. Many student admissions to the higher education, for example the university.
In contrast, some countries choose to start formal education when the student is seven or eight years old. Before they begin their formal education, children will stay with their family, learning from real experience. That is the reason why they can do well when study at institution.
In my opinion, I think children should begin formal learning at the age of seven. Learning by themselves is an initiation of their knowledge. Moreover, they can learn things they like or dislike. For some countries that begin formal education at four years old, that is too early for juvenile to start academic learning. Learning by their experience is the better way for them. Despite knowing that, some parents choose to send their issues to school, noticing that their children have to complete with another for the better place in social. In conclusion, I do agree with the education system that begin formal education at the age of seven.
ปล.เดี๋ยวผมจะเริ่มใช้เว็บไซต์ตรวจเช็กงานเเล้วครับ ชิ้นนี้น่าจะเป็นชิ้นท้ายๆที่จะถามในนี้เเล้ว
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How far do you agree with either of these views?
In each country they have their own learning style, causing many type of education system. As a result, some of education system do not work at all. To illustrate this further, we all know that Finland government educate their population better than China government. That because they use different path to educate their people.
In some states, especially far eastern, people want issues to initiate their education at age of four, starting with nursery school as the very first step of learning. After nursery school, the genuine formal education will begin with primary school, at four years old, and graduate to elementary school. Many student admissions to the higher education, for example the university.
In contrast, some countries choose to start formal education when the student is seven or eight years old. Before they begin their formal education, children will stay with their family, learning from real experience. That is the reason why they can do well when study at institution.
In my opinion, I think children should begin formal learning at the age of seven. Learning by themselves is an initiation of their knowledge. Moreover, they can learn things they like or dislike. For some countries that begin formal education at four years old, that is too early for juvenile to start academic learning. Learning by their experience is the better way for them. Despite knowing that, some parents choose to send their issues to school, noticing that their children have to complete with another for the better place in social. In conclusion, I do agree with the education system that begin formal education at the age of seven.
ปล.เดี๋ยวผมจะเริ่มใช้เว็บไซต์ตรวจเช็กงานเเล้วครับ ชิ้นนี้น่าจะเป็นชิ้นท้ายๆที่จะถามในนี้เเล้ว
Thanks!!!