พอดีครูสั่งให้เขียน paragraph 100 คำอะค่ะ เเต่ไม่เก่งอังกฤษเลยอยากให้ช่วยดูช่วยเเก้ไขให้หน่อยอะค่ะ หรือเพิ่มเติมให้หน่อยนะค่ะ
There are three things that I have done during the school break.
In the school break for 1 month I did many activities, First, I traveled with my family and sometime with my friends at temples in Bangkok, department store and zoos. Second, I read Thai language, social, mathematics, biology and made GAT Thai test at free time. Last, I made a portfolio for admission to Universities. It’s sum up, the three things I did during the school break is travel, study and made portfolio.It make me happy in the school break.
ช่วยดูให้หน่อยค่ะ เเก้ไขยังไงดี
There are three things that I have done during the school break.
In the school break for 1 month I did many activities, First, I traveled with my family and sometime with my friends at temples in Bangkok, department store and zoos. Second, I read Thai language, social, mathematics, biology and made GAT Thai test at free time. Last, I made a portfolio for admission to Universities. It’s sum up, the three things I did during the school break is travel, study and made portfolio.It make me happy in the school break.