เราเพิ่งเรียนวิชาWritingไปค่ะ กำลังฝึกเขียนเรื่องประสบการณ์เกี่ยวกับตัวเองดู อยากให้ช่วยตรวจดูให้หน่อยได้มั้ยคะว่าเขียนดีแล้วหรือยัง ปกติเป็นคนไม่เก่งอังกฤษซักเท่าไร เเกรมม่าก็ไม่ค่อยแม่นนักแหะๆถ้ายังไงรบกวนช่วยให้คำแนะนำหน่อยนะคะ ขอบคุณมากๆๆๆๆค่ะ
A Shock Experience
I never forget my shocking experience that I faced when I escaped the aggressive dogs.When I studied in Grade 12, it is the time that I need to prepare and practice for university entrance exams. I took the extra tutorial classes in every weekend from early morning to late evening. I backed my home by bicycle after I finished my class in one day. While I was riding bicycle pass the house, I saw about four or five dogs were standing in front of the yard of their house. I heard they were barking from behind and I turned my head to look at them. Suddenly, I saw they were running toward me. They are fast, fierce, and frightening. I couldn’t think of the time in my life that I felt more endangered. I reacted instinctively and I tried to maintain my speed to make sure that they will not able to chase me. The dog ran around my left leg and they tried to bite me. However, they missed and bit at the bicycle wheel. When I knew I was alright, I was trying to rush at extreme speed. I looked back over my shoulder and they were no longer chasing me. As a result of this experience, I love dogs, I am crazy about them, too. In addition, this experiences taught me how to concetrate, escape the agressive dog, and know that not all dogs are cute.
รบกวนช่วยตรวจภาษาอังกฤษให้หน่อยค่ะว่าเขียนถูกต้องมั้ย พอดีไม่ค่อยเก่งค่ะ
A Shock Experience
I never forget my shocking experience that I faced when I escaped the aggressive dogs.When I studied in Grade 12, it is the time that I need to prepare and practice for university entrance exams. I took the extra tutorial classes in every weekend from early morning to late evening. I backed my home by bicycle after I finished my class in one day. While I was riding bicycle pass the house, I saw about four or five dogs were standing in front of the yard of their house. I heard they were barking from behind and I turned my head to look at them. Suddenly, I saw they were running toward me. They are fast, fierce, and frightening. I couldn’t think of the time in my life that I felt more endangered. I reacted instinctively and I tried to maintain my speed to make sure that they will not able to chase me. The dog ran around my left leg and they tried to bite me. However, they missed and bit at the bicycle wheel. When I knew I was alright, I was trying to rush at extreme speed. I looked back over my shoulder and they were no longer chasing me. As a result of this experience, I love dogs, I am crazy about them, too. In addition, this experiences taught me how to concetrate, escape the agressive dog, and know that not all dogs are cute.