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ความคิดเห็นที่ 1
At dawn, on the slope of a hill.
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A small wooden hut in the middle of the flowing water.
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The cozy little family.
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this family have
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Subject and verb don't agree.
a mother who takes care of their children
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The word 'their' means the mother takes care of her grandchildren. Is this what you're telling us?
get it did faster
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Incorrect use of 'get'.
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It's not a sentence.
A small wooden hut in the middle of the flowing water.
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It's not a sentence.
The cozy little family.
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It's not a sentence.
Ask your teacher to teach you what a sentence is and what a fragment is.
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this family have
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Subject and verb don't agree.
a mother who takes care of their children
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The word 'their' means the mother takes care of her grandchildren. Is this what you're telling us?
get it did faster
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Incorrect use of 'get'.
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ช่วยตรวจคำไวยากรณ์ภาษาอังกฤษให้หน่อยค่ะ
At dawn, on the slope of a hill. A small wooden hut in the middle of the flowing water. The cozy little family. And this family have three children and a mother who takes care of their children.
Every day, In the morning they have made food to survive on a daily basis. And they have the duty to do to get it did faster. The three men those serves kindle and my mother is out to find fruits and vegetables to cook. Men the older name Stephan served carrying firewood. Middle man name Harry serves Kindle fire and the youngest brother named James served loggers to make kindle. But suddenly, Unexpected scene. While, Stephan throws into the fire and Rapid fire flames....Oh my god!! Fire! While they had scared and James has brought a bucket to the water of the river nears the house. The three men had helped douse is complete And they were very upset that his home had been damaged. Until! Their mother, they were rushed to say what happens And confess to what they have done inadvertently. Finally, them helped to repair the house were back together happily And the next time they will live on as a precaution.