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Saranrom Restaurant
Saranrom is the restaurant that I like because of three reasons. First of all, a waiter has good service. He always smiled although I was fussy. A waiter willingly suggested the menu for me when I could not chose the menu. When I was leaving the restaurant, he hastily opened the door. The second reason is the cost of food. It is suitable. Food rate is between 80-100 baht and 50% discount for every fourth dish ordered. Raw material is fresh and big size, such as shrimp and squid. Most of food is delicious, for example, fern salad and kale fried. When I finished eating, a waiter will serve the free dessert. The third reason is that Saranrom restaurant has a unique style. It was embellished in vintage theater style. While I was eating, he opened the 60s songs. Personel use the banana leaf to put on the dishes that are same look. It made the washing is easy. I think that is a good idea. I like to eat at Saranrom restaurant because good service, cost of food and unique style
How to Celebrate New Year Fruitfully
Follow these instructions to celebrate New Year fruitfully. First, give alms to a Buddhist monk in the morning. Wake up early for prepare the food, dessert, flowers and water. Prey the best thing for you before give alms to a Buddhist monk. Pour water for devote the merit to ancestor. Second, banquet to orphan at orphanage or elderly person at nursing home during the day. Announce the date when you organize to officer of that place. Banquet them with delicious and healthy food at noon. In the afternoon you may make funny activity, such as sing songs, dance and play games. It can make happiness for them. Finally, have a dinner with family. Choose the food that everybody can do, for example, Bar-B-Q and baking seafood. If everyone help to cook dinner, they will get feel funny. When finish the dinner, you may talk about your plan that you will take it, and you ask for the wish from your family. Your parent may be congratulatory. If you follow these three steps, it will be the best beginning day in New Year.
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ขอความช่วยเหลือ ตรวจภาษาอังกฤษค่ะ
มี 2 เรื่องนะคะ
Saranrom Restaurant
Saranrom is the restaurant that I like because of three reasons. First of all, a waiter has good service. He always smiled although I was fussy. A waiter willingly suggested the menu for me when I could not chose the menu. When I was leaving the restaurant, he hastily opened the door. The second reason is the cost of food. It is suitable. Food rate is between 80-100 baht and 50% discount for every fourth dish ordered. Raw material is fresh and big size, such as shrimp and squid. Most of food is delicious, for example, fern salad and kale fried. When I finished eating, a waiter will serve the free dessert. The third reason is that Saranrom restaurant has a unique style. It was embellished in vintage theater style. While I was eating, he opened the 60s songs. Personel use the banana leaf to put on the dishes that are same look. It made the washing is easy. I think that is a good idea. I like to eat at Saranrom restaurant because good service, cost of food and unique style
How to Celebrate New Year Fruitfully
Follow these instructions to celebrate New Year fruitfully. First, give alms to a Buddhist monk in the morning. Wake up early for prepare the food, dessert, flowers and water. Prey the best thing for you before give alms to a Buddhist monk. Pour water for devote the merit to ancestor. Second, banquet to orphan at orphanage or elderly person at nursing home during the day. Announce the date when you organize to officer of that place. Banquet them with delicious and healthy food at noon. In the afternoon you may make funny activity, such as sing songs, dance and play games. It can make happiness for them. Finally, have a dinner with family. Choose the food that everybody can do, for example, Bar-B-Q and baking seafood. If everyone help to cook dinner, they will get feel funny. When finish the dinner, you may talk about your plan that you will take it, and you ask for the wish from your family. Your parent may be congratulatory. If you follow these three steps, it will be the best beginning day in New Year.
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