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The bar chart shows female unemployment rate in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014. There are four countries in the bar chart.
The highest rate of female unemployment in 2013 is England.The rate is about 6.8 percent About another countries,The rate of female unemployment in Wales,Scotland,and Northen Ireland are about 5.4,6.1 and 5.6 percent.
In 2014,The highest rate of female unemployment is Scotland. It is about 6.7 percent.About another countries,The rate of female unemployment in England , Wale and Northen Ireland are about 6.5, 5.0 and 4.6 percent.
However,Scotland is the one of four countries that the rate of female unemployment is raising from 2013 to 2014
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The bar chart shows female unemployment rate in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014. There are four countries in the bar chart.
The highest rate of female unemployment in 2013 is England.The rate is about 6.8 percent About another countries,The rate of female unemployment in Wales,Scotland,and Northen Ireland are about 5.4,6.1 and 5.6 percent.
In 2014,The highest rate of female unemployment is Scotland. It is about 6.7 percent.About another countries,The rate of female unemployment in England , Wale and Northen Ireland are about 6.5, 5.0 and 4.6 percent.
However,Scotland is the one of four countries that the rate of female unemployment is raising from 2013 to 2014