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My hero inspired me to write this essay. He is very rich and also giving out money to people too. He has a great attitude ,hardworking and patient .My hero is Ton Passakornnatee. He is a businessman that is very famous.
Ton Passakornnatee is Thai-Chinese. He Graduated high school in three years and began working as an employee of the bearing. Starting wages in the 700 and turned professional at the newsstand in Chonburi. Then he buy a overgrowth and have started to expand his own real estate business. He married Sunisa Passakornnatee. Later he started doing business the name 'Oishi' which he made tea and juice. He was highly successful but he had to sell it to.
After that he has been very succeeding again by his effort and commitment because he created a new company by the name Ishiton and he brings income from profits to benefit his clients as well. He has many people who love him. In 2011 he received awards from Mthai Top Talk About Guy. I think that because he loves to be generous to people other than profit from his business. He taught people to do something good and successful. He said " The fear that will begin to do so, did not dare to do so do not succeed " The words that make me do what I think difficult.
From my hero Ton's story, I leaned ' If we think that we are trying to do everything to the end, never give up on something simple, even a small chance of success will be ours, it is even higher.' and ' Principles of the Business If you can win the heart of customers Maybe the price is not so important.' That make me bring this knowledge use in everyday on my life.
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บอกบ้างบางส่วนก็ยังดีค่ะ คือทำงานส่งอาจารย์แล้วไม่เก่งอังกฤษเลยค่ะ
ไม่รู้ว่าแบบนี้จะผ่านหรือเปล่า รบกวนช่วยหน่อยนะคะ ขอบคุณมากๆค่ะ
Ton Passakornnatee is Thai-Chinese. He Graduated high school in three years and began working as an employee of the bearing. Starting wages in the 700 and turned professional at the newsstand in Chonburi. Then he buy a overgrowth and have started to expand his own real estate business. He married Sunisa Passakornnatee. Later he started doing business the name 'Oishi' which he made tea and juice. He was highly successful but he had to sell it to.
After that he has been very succeeding again by his effort and commitment because he created a new company by the name Ishiton and he brings income from profits to benefit his clients as well. He has many people who love him. In 2011 he received awards from Mthai Top Talk About Guy. I think that because he loves to be generous to people other than profit from his business. He taught people to do something good and successful. He said " The fear that will begin to do so, did not dare to do so do not succeed " The words that make me do what I think difficult.
From my hero Ton's story, I leaned ' If we think that we are trying to do everything to the end, never give up on something simple, even a small chance of success will be ours, it is even higher.' and ' Principles of the Business If you can win the heart of customers Maybe the price is not so important.' That make me bring this knowledge use in everyday on my life.