กำลังจะสอบ Essay ครับ แต่ก็เข้าใจว่าตัวเองยังมีปัญหาทั้งเรื่อง Grammar และ การวางเนื้อหาอยู่พอสมควรครับ
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ช่วยลองตรวจให้ผมหน่อยน่ะครับ
ขอบพระคุณมากๆ ครับ
Thailand’s latest coup d’etat has been deploy for 3 week. The big question “Can this coup solved this country’s problem ?” come to be mainly thread of many discussion. In my own opinion, this question need to be answer from the coup leader Gen.Prayuth Chan-o-cha’s reason to deploy this coup that today’s thai political system made 2 main problems. Conflict between thais and Corruption problem.
Firstly, Conflict between Red-shirt and PDRC. This coup can not be solve the conflict despite it made even more parted. Because the coup result is not win-win but winner-take-all situation. In my own opinion, It hurt some people much more than any coup in 80 year-olds thai’s political history. So this coup can not solve conflict problem.
Corruption in previous government. In my own opinion this reason from Gen.Prayuth can clearly to answer than first. I think corruption problem can not solved by change the government. The corruption infiltrate in every thai society level. Are you pay for your child to study in High profiled school?. In other hand this coup can made even more corruption when we have not any system to validate it.
So when consider at reason to coup from Gen.Prayuth. It clearly to answer this coup can not solve this country problem. This is only my opinion. In the real world we can not answer this question now it will take a time. But this coup has been deployed so rather than discussion to answer this question it better to cooperation to bring this country keep walking.
ช่วยลองตรวจ Essay ให้ผมหน่อยครับ
ขอให้พี่ๆ ช่วยแนะแนวทางหน่อยน่ะครับ ได้ลองเขียน Essay มาภายใน 1 ชั่วโมงได้ตามนี้ครับ
ช่วยลองตรวจให้ผมหน่อยน่ะครับ
ขอบพระคุณมากๆ ครับ
Thailand’s latest coup d’etat has been deploy for 3 week. The big question “Can this coup solved this country’s problem ?” come to be mainly thread of many discussion. In my own opinion, this question need to be answer from the coup leader Gen.Prayuth Chan-o-cha’s reason to deploy this coup that today’s thai political system made 2 main problems. Conflict between thais and Corruption problem.
Firstly, Conflict between Red-shirt and PDRC. This coup can not be solve the conflict despite it made even more parted. Because the coup result is not win-win but winner-take-all situation. In my own opinion, It hurt some people much more than any coup in 80 year-olds thai’s political history. So this coup can not solve conflict problem.
Corruption in previous government. In my own opinion this reason from Gen.Prayuth can clearly to answer than first. I think corruption problem can not solved by change the government. The corruption infiltrate in every thai society level. Are you pay for your child to study in High profiled school?. In other hand this coup can made even more corruption when we have not any system to validate it.
So when consider at reason to coup from Gen.Prayuth. It clearly to answer this coup can not solve this country problem. This is only my opinion. In the real world we can not answer this question now it will take a time. But this coup has been deployed so rather than discussion to answer this question it better to cooperation to bring this country keep walking.