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At nightfall the sun goes down
I want to see your face again
If I have you in my perennial embrace
This feeling will hard to explain.

How can I just get through tonight
with my heart still chilly
when without you

I don't want to stay
alone and cry

It brought tears
to my eyes flow
like the twinkling river
of diamonds

Our lives settled
in the meadow dreams
I wish you wer
You can drive away my fear

Ages ago my life has been likened
to a castle of lights

but then it turned into
a dark cottage.

What can I say
like the sky always
collapses and my heart is
supposed to cry.

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