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My favorite Celebrity is Justin Bieber.He is a Canadian singer and songwriter.
He became the first artist After a talent manager got discovered him through YouTube videos covering songs and signed to RBMG
and Island Records.Bieber released his debut EP,My world In 2009.He became the first artist to have seven songs from a debut record chart on the Billboard Hot 100.He was on concert Tour,In his career really taken off.And Now he has four albums.He’s an up-and-coming Pop star.
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