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คือผมต้องการ 5.5 ก็จริง แต่ผมอยากรู้ว่าองค์ประกอบ + ปัจจัยที่ทำให้ writing ได้คะแนนมากขึ้นกว่านี้ครับ(เผื่อว่าอาจจะต้องทำให้ได้มากขึ้นในอนาคต)
อันนี้ผมเขียน part 2 นะครับ 251 word
อันนี้ถามผู้รู้เพิ่มเติม ถ้า eassy ประมาณนี้คะแนนเท่าไร ควร improve ด้านไหนครับ
The increasing number of overweight populance is a serious problem on the health care system in an effort to manage with the issues involved. some person speculate that the best way to handle with this problem introduce more physical education lessons for understand and admit the overweight problem in the school curriculum.i am absolutely agree in this term
At first start ,problem is peoples are never realize how scarry when you overweight and become more illness like open the gate for diease or litte knowlege on it because in normal class in school or even university (as i have experience) are never underline about overweight problem ,as media are never or less boardcast about negative side of food and beverage that mix with sugar or affect a obesity problem ,so why media are not underline this story? because they are own product of food and breverage that made overwieght! if their owner are not own boardcast ,they can aillance with media too,that's way of capitalism
Nevertheless still can be solve problem ,if we can put a idea into the chirden when they study in school curiculum.a chirden can implant about how to take care health by themselve by select food or beverage ,you know chirden are more eaiser to accept idea better than mature whether the learn , and need to launch more an event about diease that relate when you overwieght ,or push individual to lauch more low cal plus low sugar food and beverage even healthly is good too.
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คือผมต้องการ 5.5 ก็จริง แต่ผมอยากรู้ว่าองค์ประกอบ + ปัจจัยที่ทำให้ writing ได้คะแนนมากขึ้นกว่านี้ครับ(เผื่อว่าอาจจะต้องทำให้ได้มากขึ้นในอนาคต)
อันนี้ผมเขียน part 2 นะครับ 251 word
อันนี้ถามผู้รู้เพิ่มเติม ถ้า eassy ประมาณนี้คะแนนเท่าไร ควร improve ด้านไหนครับ
The increasing number of overweight populance is a serious problem on the health care system in an effort to manage with the issues involved. some person speculate that the best way to handle with this problem introduce more physical education lessons for understand and admit the overweight problem in the school curriculum.i am absolutely agree in this term
At first start ,problem is peoples are never realize how scarry when you overweight and become more illness like open the gate for diease or litte knowlege on it because in normal class in school or even university (as i have experience) are never underline about overweight problem ,as media are never or less boardcast about negative side of food and beverage that mix with sugar or affect a obesity problem ,so why media are not underline this story? because they are own product of food and breverage that made overwieght! if their owner are not own boardcast ,they can aillance with media too,that's way of capitalism
Nevertheless still can be solve problem ,if we can put a idea into the chirden when they study in school curiculum.a chirden can implant about how to take care health by themselve by select food or beverage ,you know chirden are more eaiser to accept idea better than mature whether the learn , and need to launch more an event about diease that relate when you overwieght ,or push individual to lauch more low cal plus low sugar food and beverage even healthly is good too.
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