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People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experience, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
       University is one of the most valuable life experiences. People deciding to study in college have various reasons. Studying in the campus, they can obtain specific knowledge with professional teachers, prepare themselves for a working life, and get new social experiences.  
        To begin with, university has a myriad of major studies taught by excellent professors. They can deeply learn plenty of knowledge. To illustrate, when I was in high school, I always doubted that why the government used fiscal theory more than monetary theory. After studying in economics faculty at the university, I just found very clear and reasonable answers.
   Moreover, during this time, not only can they learn academic knowledge, but they can also get necessary skills. For example, they have to manage time and choose what is the most important thing to do first by themselves. This practice will help them to wisely plan the schedule when working .Furthermore, a myriad of problems they made during study is a great practice. The more they face the problems, the stronger person they can be. It is obvious that how they deal with university life can affect the working life.
        Furthermore, most people cannot deny that the university life is the experience that they will never forget because they living with students coming from different environments will get the varieties of aspects and sometimes conflicts may appear so they have to listen to others and adapt themselves in order to live together with their friends.  

        All things considered, University does not provide all things they want but it provides essential skills they need. Although it is not easy to get through this step of life, looking back, they will find that it is worth it. Personally, I never regret attending the university.
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