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Hello everyone, this is my first time that I tell my story to other people like this. My name is Della. I married to my husband, Jim, for 2 years. He is an employee in the big company; however, he gets really few money from it. We have very little money and live in a modest apartment. However, we both have our precious things which are Jim's gold pocket watch that had been his father's and his grandfather's, and my lustrous, long hair that falls almost to my knees. On Christmas Eve, after paying all of the bills, I only have $1.87 to buy Jim's Christmas present.

I want to buy Jim a chain for his pocket watch, but they're all out of my price range. That led me to cut off my hair to sell and got $20.00. It is enough to buy the platinum chain I saw in a shop window for $21.00. I went back to my home and wait for Jim to come back, but he did not come back to our house that night..
My bad Christmas.
Hello everyone, this is my first time that I tell my story to other people like this. My name is Della. I married to my husband, Jim, for 2 years. He is an employee in the big company; however, he gets really few money from it. We have very little money and live in a modest apartment. However, we both have our precious things which are Jim's gold pocket watch that had been his father's and his grandfather's, and my lustrous, long hair that falls almost to my knees. On Christmas Eve, after paying all of the bills, I only have $1.87 to buy Jim's Christmas present.
I want to buy Jim a chain for his pocket watch, but they're all out of my price range. That led me to cut off my hair to sell and got $20.00. It is enough to buy the platinum chain I saw in a shop window for $21.00. I went back to my home and wait for Jim to come back, but he did not come back to our house that night..