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อันนี้หัวเรื่องว่า "โน้มน้าวเพื่อนต่างชาติชาวอเมริกันที่ตั้งใจจะมาเที่ยวไทย แต่หลังได้รับทราบประกาศคำเตือนของรัฐบาลสหรัฐเกี่ยวกับสถานการณ์การเมืองไทยจึงลังเล"
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As you know, there have been political demonstrations in the Thailand’s capital of Bangkok which cause the warning issue for American citizens who will travel to the country to revise their plans. However, as a Thai citizen living in the center of Bangkok, I precisely realize what is happening in Thailand which is not as severe as news reports have displayed. Let me explain further as follows.
Thailand, a parliamentary democrary with a constitutional monarch, accepts political protests by those who have different views on Thai politics and allowed them to voice their complaints as long as they abide by the law. At the time being, the caretaker government respects the right of expression of the protesters and pledged to not use forces to resolve the problem while the oppistion side similarly announced to stage the demonstrations peacefully. Hence, the curent political situation in Bangkok, as part of real democracy, is peacful.
In addition, the protests areas are limited to central Bangkok and announced exactly by the protest leaders. Travelling to other provinces is a good way in case that you are really concerned about disruptions from the protests. Thailand also has many tourism destionations and attractions in other provinces including Chiangmai, Phuket, Hua Hin and Khonkhan. I can guarantee that you will never be affected by the political conflict during your trip in those provinces. Nontheless, many foreigners are still living and travelling in the capital city even within those protests sites since they truly understand the peaceful situation and relize that they are still safe.
However, the emergency decree and the security act are in place. In case that the situation got worse, The government will appropriately impose either of them to ensure safety of all people in the relevant areas. The process is legal and in line with the global standard.
To conclude, although Thailand is facing a problem which is not severe like the outsiders see, I am sure you can come to my country as planned and still enjoy your trip in any places just like those farangs currently seeing the peaceful protests situations as positively amazing.
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อันนี้หัวเรื่องว่า "โน้มน้าวเพื่อนต่างชาติชาวอเมริกันที่ตั้งใจจะมาเที่ยวไทย แต่หลังได้รับทราบประกาศคำเตือนของรัฐบาลสหรัฐเกี่ยวกับสถานการณ์การเมืองไทยจึงลังเล"
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As you know, there have been political demonstrations in the Thailand’s capital of Bangkok which cause the warning issue for American citizens who will travel to the country to revise their plans. However, as a Thai citizen living in the center of Bangkok, I precisely realize what is happening in Thailand which is not as severe as news reports have displayed. Let me explain further as follows.
Thailand, a parliamentary democrary with a constitutional monarch, accepts political protests by those who have different views on Thai politics and allowed them to voice their complaints as long as they abide by the law. At the time being, the caretaker government respects the right of expression of the protesters and pledged to not use forces to resolve the problem while the oppistion side similarly announced to stage the demonstrations peacefully. Hence, the curent political situation in Bangkok, as part of real democracy, is peacful.
In addition, the protests areas are limited to central Bangkok and announced exactly by the protest leaders. Travelling to other provinces is a good way in case that you are really concerned about disruptions from the protests. Thailand also has many tourism destionations and attractions in other provinces including Chiangmai, Phuket, Hua Hin and Khonkhan. I can guarantee that you will never be affected by the political conflict during your trip in those provinces. Nontheless, many foreigners are still living and travelling in the capital city even within those protests sites since they truly understand the peaceful situation and relize that they are still safe.
However, the emergency decree and the security act are in place. In case that the situation got worse, The government will appropriately impose either of them to ensure safety of all people in the relevant areas. The process is legal and in line with the global standard.
To conclude, although Thailand is facing a problem which is not severe like the outsiders see, I am sure you can come to my country as planned and still enjoy your trip in any places just like those farangs currently seeing the peaceful protests situations as positively amazing.
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