รบกวนตรวจแกรมม่าให้หน่อยครับ

Unexpected things can heppen every once in a while. e.g. while you were using your computer, the electricity suddenly blacked out. The problem is that you didn't save your work yet. Then what do you think you would do to handle this situation. If the situation is out of your control and it's too late to be fixed you might say some rude words , be pissed off and just let it go since it's noting you can do. You might start over with bad temper and update a status on fb just in case anyone losing his temper after wasting of time reading yours. this kind of teasing is great but you have to admit that very few people would read such long paragraph which was written more than 8 lines.

อันนี้เป็นสเตตัสที่พิมพ์แล้ว แต่ล้มเลิกการกดส่ง แต่ครั้นจะลบทิ้งก็เสียดาย เลยเอามาให้พี่ๆช่วยแนะนำว่าควรศึกษาเพิ่มเติมตรงไหน

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