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Hello everybody i want to write my story to share and improve my english.

At this time i so confuse about my future. i graduate from university in design major but i work not about i study.
My family has own business and it can make more money than what's job i like to do. At now i have 2 choices.

1. I work at home and do i like when i've free times.
2. I will study continuous master degree about design and then i finished study i will work at there for along times.

If i choose 1 i may be business man, My life after that i think i have more money and warm hearted family. but i don't like about management, business and bla bla blaah. But really life i still want to spend money make my happiness. i still want buy something and travel. It is my happy to use money but when i work it's not, It's only happy when spend moneys.

If i choose 2 i may be artist, My life after that i think i have less money but i will happy everytime i work. One thing i care that's my future family, I afraid about money becuase it's very importent. I want to have big houses, cars, warm hearted family
and my good future sons. But this job i like to do it's not support my family.

Do you think what should i do ?   and please suggest me to write strong english grammar thanks you.
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